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My sweet one, my angel,
My sorrow and joy.
My pains and my blessings,
My small living toy.

Crushed inside,
Your small heart bleed.
So many tears to cry,
Yet you only have two eyes.

You hold them so tightly,
My bitter hearted child.
Crushing them like glass,
Though it'll only hurt more tomorrow.

This wasn't your fault,
These tears left unshed.
I never knew my child,
That you'd take to heart what I had said.

My wish was for you to be strong,
But now I see.
The only was for you to be strong,
Is to be free.
©2006-2008 ~Rueann
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My first submission, I figured I'd better do something, my area is awfully bare :)
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~Tsuminasama:iconTsuminasama: Mar 10, 2006, 4:34:12 PM
This is BEAUTIFUL! It's so tender and careful that it charmed me right away. I'm so favoriting this..

The last stanza holds perhaps the most beauty in it, and the second stanza really touched me as well.

You've got a knack for poetry! I'm gonna 'watch' you, so write more.

[Suu]

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~Rueann:iconRueann: Mar 10, 2006, 4:38:52 PM
Thank you! I'll be sure to add more soon! :begone:

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